Date: 2008-08-19 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archon-mentha.livejournal.com
You built a very believable, very real family for Cain. I liked them, but not so much that they didn't seem like real people.

I like the theme of finding memories/recovering - and also of running. It's easy to imagine Glitch getting spooked like that!

Very enjoyable read - great pacing. Thanks for posting it!
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