That was a fantastic ending! Unpredictable! And unpredictable still! Another beautiful Cain shall find her way home.
Sorry it took me so long to read this, but I really did enjoy it, and, honestly, taking my time might've helped me enjoy it all the more. Time to think about it, to miss the characters, like sprightly Ella, to wonder what sort of catastrophe of a date might next befall Ambrose. Your Oc's were wondrous, believable and real, people that I'd want to be friends with! The overall execution of the story was handle with your masterful touch.
Thanks for writing this and working so hard on it! I've loved it well.
And now I think I understand that comment you left at Eli, about girls named Lucy! How cool is that!
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Date: 2008-09-11 08:26 pm (UTC)Sorry it took me so long to read this, but I really did enjoy it, and, honestly, taking my time might've helped me enjoy it all the more. Time to think about it, to miss the characters, like sprightly Ella, to wonder what sort of catastrophe of a date might next befall Ambrose. Your Oc's were wondrous, believable and real, people that I'd want to be friends with! The overall execution of the story was handle with your masterful touch.
Thanks for writing this and working so hard on it! I've loved it well.
And now I think I understand that comment you left at Eli, about girls named Lucy! How cool is that!