I finished reading it, finally! I've been coming back to it whenever I have time, and I just want to tell you that I think it's gorgeous. Your characterization is awesome, your plot holds its tension, and I love the way you've reworked the story into modern days. I also love that you let it have a happy ending, because I wasn't sure that you were going to. And, just regarding this chapter, I thought the way that you invoked the fallen nights to help Arthur and Tristan embark on their future paths was incredibly moving, and just lovely.